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Working size- 6500x7000px
Time spent- ~8 hours (2 weeks)
Layers- 50+
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No, I have not taught myself how to do backgrounds since last time. :D

Though, I've spent so much time procrastinating this, I need to post it now. I applied some of that color theory I read about here, as well as tried to do that fade effect that you see sometimes in anime. I don't know how to do grass, and I'm not going to break down and use the Photoshop standard grass brush, so I made due with making up my own style of grass makin. There are still some things that annoy me, like how she looks too pale, and how I can't get the background quite right... Whatever. I'll probably just steal a background idea from a nice poster or something that I see.

As usual, critique is welcomed. :D

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:iconnoster7:
It looks very nice! I like the green eyes!
:iconaoi-hoshi:
Random fact:
The eye colors of all my characters were chosen more or less randomly. I just played around with the hue settings until it looked right. :D

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:iconmafiosa-puppy:
The hair! It looks so purdy! Dang! This is really good! You're improving so much. XD
The only things I see wrong are the eyes. You should move them in a little more towards the nose to give it more of a natural look. And lift the one of the right a tiny bit to be even with the left. XD Oh, and I think the left side of her face it off a bit as well. Slim it a little bit more so the whole face is even. Besides those, this is really good. The coloring is phenomenal (sp? XD)! I wish I knew how to color like that. o.o

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:iconnoster7:
Random is great!
:iconmeerin:
very pretty!

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:iconchia-4rmfuture:
well, don't use too bright background If you don't want her face looks pale....

are you using distort and motion blur to your grass??
It seems great you know?! :love:

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:iconwinrry:
Very pretty,love the way you coloured it :)
:iconespeo-the-ice-demon:
Awesome Picture ^^

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:iconmen-jo:
Wow, you've gotten a lot better with
your art, 'specially with the coloring!
My favorite part is the hair.
The eyes are a bit askew, but not enough
to be distracting.
She's seems to be leaning forward a bit,
so it'd be nice to see her putting weight
on her arm.
Or, she could have been leaning back a tad,
and her hand could rest delicately
in her lap.

You've improved so much, keep on
keeping on!:D

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September 30, 2008
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